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Friday, 24 October 2014

..so its a new morning..

..so its a new morning..i can hear the birds chirping..still having hangover from yesterdays party..now every break up seems like a party..they say love is life..but for me love has always been chimeric..for me friends have been life..and friendship..a madness..have always loved their company..we all know of the story of the moth and the flame..and the fate moth meets..the same is my story..the vicious cycle goes on..
...so its a new morning..yesterday i have buried in the cacophony of Sean Paul's song..gyrating myself out of a hopeless story..i was chasing a mirage..chasing a shadow..they say love is strange..it is really strange..strange is life..
...so its a new morning..and i used to talk to her..for hours..listening to her laughs..her jokes..a friendship soon boiled into love..a beautiful feeling..that was indeed love..i felt it..umpteen times..they say love just happens..you never know and by the time you realize you are already deep into it..it does not need reason..
..so its a new morning..one more page adds to my book of defeat.. i am again lamenting a broken song..one more dream gone wrong..
.so its a new morning..life is not rosy..life is not moon,stars and daffodils..it is not a riverdale story..life is brutally dark..life is ugly..life is Bukowskian..and now i am loving this darkness..
..so its a new morning..i feel like a stupid..i laugh at my yesterdays..for i was looking for a truth that never existed..
..so its a new morning..and as i write these last lines..a butterfly lands on this page..nothing more to say..

17 comments:

  1. I read wonderful lines written by you. The words you have used and the art of writing you have devised are worth praising. The way you have expressed has a magical power in it which keeps the reader glued to it. its fascinating. Thanks a lot for your wonderful creation which you have shared with us. Plz do writing such wonderful things.

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  2. You really write so well. It was a pleasure reading the above.
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  3. Life is strange and more than that love is! You do, it makes you fly, the other day you fall. It depends on you whether to consider it worth to still rely and walk hand in hand or leave it all as a memory of past.
    All of us with different perspective yet all of us knows well what feeling love bless :)

    beautiful writing as always :)

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  4. Very nicely Done! It is circular - light and dark, just as life and love are. Embrace the darkness, it is temporary...and creativity will rise from it. Carpe Diem to the new morning :)

    BE well,
    Ron

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  5. Lovely to see you write again Rigzin! Darkness and Light compliment each other for one cannot be realized in the absence of the other. We learned a hymn when in school. A few lines of the hymn said "when in the dusk or the twilight, dim be the region afar, will not the deepening darkness brighten the glimmering star?" This is so true - always has proved to be for me... Thanks for sharing this post : )

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  6. Great...the way the poet started loving the darkness "foolish mistakes"... Never came across so meaningful pace for the word 'dark' :)

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  7. Without the dark, the value of light is never really appreciated....same is with life and love..:)

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  8. There is light after dark, go through the darkness and step out into the bright light of life. Your creativity shines through and so does your pain and hurt, but life is a crazy mix of good and bad. Embrace the good, ignore the bad and keep writing...take care

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  9. I bet, there are many who can relate to this abstract. Beautifully written!

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  10. Love how your streams of consciousness balance the happy and the sad. The insistent 'so it's a new morning' is like the author forcing himself to believe it, yet not quite getting there. Lovely piece of thoughts!

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  11. Lovely! I love your imageries, simple and yet so powerful. Your writing never fails to move me. Keep it up

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  12. well done i like it my friend, it seems i have lived this.

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  14. Love the way you write, so intense and powerful... words do magic :)

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  15. rigzin...i will just say this
    tu nahi koi aur sahi....koi aur nahi koi aur sahi....:P

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